The charts give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

The charts give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
The charts provide data relating to different methods of
misuse
disposal in a particular country in 1960 and 2011. Over the period, the amount of paper, food and other
misuse
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that was disposed of
falling
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noticeably.
On the other hand
, people got rid of a larger ratio of plastic, wood, and food.
Finally
, disposal of other items remained roughly constant. In 1960, paper made up
one quarter
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of total
misuse
disposal, but by 2011,
this
had fallen to slightly less than one-sixth.
Moreover
, the ratio of textiles
also
experienced a considerable drop, decreasing from 17% to 11%.
Lastly
, the proportion of textiles discarded in 2011 was three times lower (4%) than it was in 1960 (12%).
In contrast
, the rate of food discarded in 2011 (21%) was substantially higher than the figure of 12% in 1960,
while
the figure for wood was twice as high, at 8% compared to 4%. Another notable increase was in the ratio of plastic thrown away, which by 2011 (18%) was more than double the 1960 figure (8%). (173 words)
Last
but not least, the disposal of green
misuse
, metal, and glass stayed mostly unchanged, with proportions of approximately 9% for the first two and 5% for the latter

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Vocabulary: Replace the words misuse with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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