The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?

Nowadays, due to the fact that the number of people who are travelling around the world has racked up, tourist industries are growing rapidly in many countries which has both its merits and demerits.

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, both its positive and negative points will be discussed in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, having

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to new places in the world has some major plus points in which both visitors and hosts are beneficial. It is undeniable that people by visiting different cultures, societies and events as well in different countries closely could have a better experience than seeing these places on the internet or other cold-technologies.

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, these people could bring positive points of these cultures to their countries or their life.

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addition, individuals who are going and seeing other nations can help locals with their money which is spent in countries. So they can have a better life with

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money, build new tourist sites or repair historical buildings which are in their cities or villages.

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instance, the Spanish who goes to Thailand give money to buy foods, accommodations and transportations in

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the other hand, travelling around the world has its own disadvantages.

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, people who choose to go a destination in other countries usually use an

airplane

for their transport. While,

airplanes

have irreparable damage on our planet due to burning fossil fuels and producing greenhouse gases.

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, a person who visits some tourist sites, especially historical ones could damage these places either.

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example, people who visit a historic bridge in Isfahan could have devastating damage by walking on it. To make the long story a short,

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expenses have risen, thereby the growth of overseas travels, which has its cons and pros.

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my view the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.