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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some people think that, to achieve great things in sports we need natural talent.
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, a few people think that it takes hard
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 and training to become successful. In my opinion, it is all about the efforts, that really matters in accomplishing our goals.
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 with, all the great persons who have made some remarkable achievements in their careers, are not the one's born with natural talents.
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 to that, if the natural inheritance played a major role in determining success, there would have been very less eminent sports personalities in the world.
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, MS.Dhoni a renowned cricket player started his career as a soccer player. But, later through his hard
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, he became a prominent personality in cricket.
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, the only thing that matters is, the strenuous efforts and persistence.
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, if natural skills combined with great efforts, always leads us in a way of achieving greater heights.
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, to attain big things in respective fields, a little bit of talent is
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 essential.
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, the player with inherent abilities, always has the upper hand in reaching the targets.
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, the special privileges play, some of its supporting roles in the required time frame.
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, to reach our ambitions, the only thing we need is the hard
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 combined with relentless efforts. If we rely only on our talents the success will be limited to a certain extent.
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, if we
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 harder with persistence the luck will favour us automatically, and will serve its purposes.
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