The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town collects rainwater to process in order to use as drinking
water
. Overall
, rainwater collected from the rooftops has to be processed by chemical
and filtered, before it can be used as drinking Fix the agreement mistake
chemicals
water
.
Initially
, the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected by the gutter and then
runs down the pipe at the side of the house into the drain located under the ground. Each houses
collect rainwater in Change to a singular noun
house
such
a way and passed along underground drains to the water
filter.
The water
filter removes any impurities and the water
once filtered continues to flow into the storage tank for further
processing. From this
point, the water
flows from the storage to the water
treatment tank. Chemical
Fix the agreement mistake
Chemicals
added
to the Add a missing verb
are added
water
for purification in order to make it fit for consumption. Once water
is treated and made ready for drinking, it travels along the pipes that lead back to houses where people can use it for daily consumption.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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