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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given flow chart shows the process that the Australian Bureau of Meteorology follows to assemble weather
information
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 via
such
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 ways as
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satellite
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satellites
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,
radar
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 and drifting
buoys
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 to provide reliable weather
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forecast
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forecasts
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 to the public. It can be clearly seen that the process of collecting
information
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 demands different steps.
Satellite
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,
radar
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 and drifting
buoys
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 are the most popular and frequently used tools for collecting data to prepare the
forecast
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.
According to
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 the chart, the Australian Bureau of Meteorology relies on satellites, radars and drifting
buoys
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 to collect initial data. For
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satellite
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satellites
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, the
information
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 turns into
satellite
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 photos, which are analyzed by bureau specialists. The
information
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 from
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radar
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the radar
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 transforms into the
radar
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 screen, and one from
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buoys
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the buoys
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 turns into the synoptic chart. After collecting data, specialists
then
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 analyze it on computer devices. In
this
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 stage, the
forecast
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 is prepared to be broadcast to the mass people. The prepared
forecast
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 on weather is
then
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 sent to television, radio and recording devices for the citizens all around the country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, satellite, radar, buoys, forecast with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Meteorology
  • Accurate weather forecasts
  • Satellite images
  • Radar
  • Drifting buoys
  • Central forecasting office
  • Dedicated communication channels
  • Analyzed and interpreted
  • Meteorologists
  • Advanced computer models
  • Weather predictions
  • Distributed
  • General public and specific stakeholders
  • Television, radio, internet
  • Continuous updates
  • Ever-changing nature
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