Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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. For example
, in international sport
competitions, competitors do not physical exercise some days ago of competitions. They rest for mental conditions and only focus to win. Also
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physical
strength
is more required for success
in sport
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