Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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.
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For example
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competitions, competitors do not physical exercise some days ago of competitions. They rest for mental conditions and only focus to win. Use synonyms
Also
positive thinking
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pyhsical
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
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success
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sport
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sport
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For instance
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,
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,
themself
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sport
with their physical states.
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like physical Suggestion
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or mental Use synonyms
strength
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success
in sports. I believe both of them are Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite