Success is often measure by wealth and material belonging. Do you think wealth is best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
Some people believe that
success
is the best way to measure by wealth and materialistic life
, however
, in my view, these things are not the best way as it requires sheer hardship, dedication
as well as goals for accomplishment. Also
, I believe that a supportive family and health make one
a successful person
.
On the one
hand, every person
thinks that having money and material things brings success
in life
. This
is because they perceived that a wealthy person
is successful because they have enough money and luxurious life
, however
, in my perception, such
rich people are not successful in real life
owing to having some goals to achieve. For example
, although
Bill Gates is a rich person
, having a real asset of $4 billion and found to be successful, he has some desired goals in his life
to achieve which makes him more successful in real life
. Moreover
, in anyone’s life
success
always come with hardship and dedication
. If a person
does not do any hard work to achieve his or her goals with complete dedication
, he or she will not get success
in life
.
On the other hand
, I think that there are many things which make one
person
successful. Firstly
, having a supportive family makes one
life
successful. As such
family was always there with us at the time when we need them most particularly at bad times. Finally
, good health plays an integral role in anyone’s life
to become successful. For instance
, if people are healthy, fit and fine, they will work more and become successful in the future.
In conclusion, success
is believed by some that having wealth and luxurious things makes one
successful, however
, in my opinion, achieving goals that are targeted with sheer dedication
brings success
in anyone’s life
. Moreover
, supportive family and being healthy plays a pivotal role to become successful.Submitted by jdsmss on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!