In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Technology apps has become widely popular among a developed countries for a different purpose like
business
and travel. A segments of people believe that some application for communication like email, yahoo, gmail may have a disadvantage outweigh the advantages in a near future.
However
, i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
intend to go deeply into the roots before agreeing with the statement. On one hand, people's life has become more convenient with the use of technologies. They don't have to travel a far, just to convey one message. They can simply login in their gmail or other communication application to send the message either for
business
purpose or for their personal use.
In addition
, it is
also
more safe to send private details or
information
rather than sending by a letter because they are not delivered quickly and may be not safely as mails or yahoo do. Indeed, it is hard to imagine the world without technologies.
For instance
: The current study done by the Stanford university revealed that about 98% of people use the
information
Technology for in and out of message. Overall, the major development in the technology apps has changed the means of communication in an effective way.
On the other hand
, it is inarguable to deny the fact that despite the major advantages, there are risks too while using those applications. The most current unsafe issue is hacking system. People are so smart these days, they easily hack other's private
information
.
For instance
, recently the news published in daily mail reported that Australian bank was hacked by the hackers.
Moreover
, there may be on more meeting in the
business
face to face if every every discussion is done through technologies which may not good for the
business
. In conclusion, i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
slightly agree that there is some risk of using the application because of the chances of leaking important
i
nformation but
Accept comma addition
information, but
if it is used wisely and more in a protective way,
then
it has more benefits than negative sides.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • technological dependency
  • data breaches
  • identity theft
  • digital divide
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence
  • e-waste
  • social inequalities
  • mental health issues
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