Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

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There are some opinions which promote the use of
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to gather people in various cultures and ages together. In my opinion, I agree with the promotion of
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as one of the tools to live with different people. I think that
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has several advantages, in
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essay, I will mention advantages in both cognitive and social aspects.
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, the brain is designed to relax itself when it detects
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or rhythm. Several studies have said that
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part
of the brain, which control the function of joy or excitement will be activated when the
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is played.
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, a group of psychologists detected and examined brain waves released by test-takers in various conditions. The result was chemicals and wave signs that are related to happiness and relaxation were at the highest level, while test-takers were listening to
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. From
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study, it is reasonable that if
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creates joy and a peace of mind, people who listen to
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frequently will live in society much more happily than those who do not. So,
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music
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the music
makes people to be more joyful and, perhaps, open to others.
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, it is refutable that
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is not part of human culture or our traits. We are born with some skills which we can master without being taught. One of those is the ability of making a vibrant rhythm and responding to
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or melody.
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, toddlers can clap their hands at the same pace with the
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while listening to it. Another example is when people are bored, some of them may even knock some objects to create a rhythmic sound and make everybody else enjoy. As one philosopher said, “
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is part of our life,
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lives everywhere”. Since
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is common in every culture,
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is maybe the
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interaction in bonding each other.
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,
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is the tool to bond with people, interact with other cultures and it is our common traits and instincts throughout every age. Young, old, Asian, American, European or African people understand
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.
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,
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can bring us together, as one humanity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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