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The teacher plays a vital role in educating and shaping the future of our society. Unfortunately, teachers are losing its reputation due to poor quality and the amount of money they make as a living. The majority of people have a tendency to underrate the values of being a teacher which I strongly disagree with. I've wanted to become a teacher and I think it is time to redeem the value of the teachers and I'm willing to contribute in my own way. The Tomujin Alternative School will be the best fit for me. It offers not only programmes that differs from the traditional programmes and provide me with the hands-on training, but
also
 teach me about real life skills and communication.
In addition
 to just programmes, I strive to work with a group of people who works as a team. The people around you have a huge influence on your perspectives, growth and probability of success. I'm willing to surround myself with positive, hard working and dedicated students who will influence each other in a good way. Learning from your mistakes is one of the most important skill to have in life. To take myself as an example, I was so dependent to the point where I would do my homework and projects just to show the teachers and to get a good grade. I was reluctant to do extra works and put effort in education until I realized I was following the wrong path and decided to work on my weaknesses.
For instance
, I have been studying German on my own through the apps and the sources of information on the Internet and I have been improving my English step by step since
then
. I learned to put a lot of effort, time and dedication to what I'm doing.
In other words
, I became dedicated and independent. Winning
this
 scholarship would help me to be one step closer to my ultimate goal and I will do what it takes to achieve it.
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