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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Do you think there more advantages than disadvantages?

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According to some experts the study of a foreign
language
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 is preferable in elementary
school
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 than middle. The idea here is that
benefits
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the benefits
 of learning external
language
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 outweigh the detriments. I truly believe
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in
this
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 statement. On the one hand, children are learning a foreign
language
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 in primary
school
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 is very helpful for them. Because pupils can understand expression, lifestyle and culture of a different country and is advantageous for enhancing of their perspectives.
Secondly
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, is the fact that children, who are approximately between 5 to 9
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years
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an
 ability to remember things
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faster
 and effectively than older age of students.
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, when I was in the fourth-fifth grade, I used to memorize new words easily,
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 now I cannot even keep in mind some phrases.
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, pupils who are only 5-8 year-old, it could be confusing and complex to study different languages simultaneously.
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 It would affect poorly for their education.
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, pupils of a primary
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 should learn exact science
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 as mathematics and physics.
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Otherwise they
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Otherwise, they
 might not realize them later.
Furthermore
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, if a student doesn’t know his or her native
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 perfectly, it is useless to learn foreign
language
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. To sum up, In spite of some difficulties about learning
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second
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a second language
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 in primary
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, it could aspect positively for children.
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,  knowing foreign phrases will be never excessive. In future knowing one more
language
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 might be very prestigious.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
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