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Some people think that children should not watch television because it has negative effects, while others believe that television helps children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is thought by a few individuals, that children should not allow to watch
TV
 set, as it’s has many adverse effects and some other group believe children should watch the
TV
 as it’s support them to learn more about the studies and enhance their knowledge.
To begin
 with detrimental side of
TV box
Suggestion
the TV box
, if we consider there are many reasons not to watch children's television, like inappropriate advertisement, music videos and
TV
 shows, which leads to children makes aggressive and changes their complete thoughts for
life
 and towards families. In the clearest example, some of the
TV
 shows are banned due to that children were committed suicide and has gone on the wrong path like crime and other bad social elements.
On the contrary
,
TV
 has some positive side itself and it’s help to children learn new things and support for studies, as many
TV
 shows made on success story of children and others real star. Which actually changes a child's
life
 and they become more responsible and set their career goals to achieve. There are many movies, which actually show the real
life
 hero stories and we need to show our children those kind of videos. MS Dhoni (movies) is one clear example, which is made with Indian Cricket Team captain and it’s showing the whole struggle of
life
 MS Dhoni, since he was born and become Indian Cricket Team captain. To conclude
this
, I trust both statements have their own aspects and children should watch Television with their parents or limited time period in the day. The should allow for particular channels, where he could not find any inappropriate shows.
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