Over recent years, mobile phones have become an indispensable tool in our daily lives. However, there are several problems such as social and medical which must not be ignored. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.

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In recent years, humans have made an

anormous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

amount of progress in technology which

inchance

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in chance

helping us to make our life a better way of living. Mobile phones are

such

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a creation which leads humans to the

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level of their intelligence. Actually mobile phones are the key which makes the interaction of humans easier throughout the world but still there are

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as touching

claims which oppose the

invention

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of mobile phones worthy. Looking back, the

invention

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of mobile phones made a huge revolution

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our society which help us to popularize our idea with a great ease. Mobile phones as the name suggests are easy to carry, to

use

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and easy to maintain. With

advancement

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the advancement

techonology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

and

passage

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the passage

of time,

their

in or at that place

there

evolution

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an evolution

in the history of mobile phones from wired to wireless and

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touchable panels which actually carry more information than Apollo-I- mission to

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the moon

. Talking about the economic point of view, they

makes

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make

the business

more easier

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easier

. In severe conditions, like in

coronavirus lockdown period many

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the coronavirus lockdown period, many

the coronavirus lockdown period many

government meetings have been taking into action through video calls on mobile phones for talking about strategies and implementation of rules that could cover the threat of

coronavirus

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. Even

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

are able to study online because of mobile phones.

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to these all viewpoints, there are certain facts which had to be considered like they often attract

humans

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human

human's

humans'

attention which lead to many of its

sideeffects

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side effects

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, excess

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of mobile phone can result to

weakning

becoming weaker

weakening

of eyesight.

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, many researchers have proven that excessive

use

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of mobile phones can

disturd

make false by mutilation or addition; as of a message or story

distort

disturb

a person's mindset which lead to anxiety and

unconsiousness

a state lacking normal awareness of the self or environment

unconsciousness

. The harmful radiations emitted by phones can disturb human nerve impulses which could be a result of many dangerous diseases. Not so, even for

childrens which

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children, which

children which

tends towards gaming, watching

movies etc

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movies, etc

on mobile phones rather than searching for their

studing

reading carefully with intent to remember

studying

standing

material could cause a great threat to them.

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, everything has its own shortcomings and benefits, which could be balanced by its proper

use

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that in turn help us to

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outshine

its

invention

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, we can say, that mobile phones are indispensable

invention

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to human kind.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Indispensable tool
Excessive use
Social media
Smartphones
Access to information
Emergency calls
GPS navigation
Addiction
Eye strain
Potential radiation exposure
Superficial interactions
Face-to-face communication
Personal safety
Prolonged use
Quality time

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Over recent years, mobile phones have become an indispensable tool in our daily lives. However, there are several problems such as social and medical which must not be ignored. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.

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