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Over recent years, mobile phones have become an indispensable tool in our daily lives. However, there are several problems such as social and medical which must not be ignored. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones.

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In recent years, humans have made an
anormous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
enormous
 amount of progress in technology which
inchance
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in chance
 helping us to make our life a better way of living. Mobile phones are
such
 a creation which leads humans to the
next
 level of their intelligence. Actually mobile phones are the key which makes the interaction of humans easier throughout the world but still there are
astouching
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as touching
 claims which oppose the
invention
 of mobile phones worthy. Looking back, the
invention
 of mobile phones made a huge revolution
on
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in
 our society which help us to popularize our idea with a great ease. Mobile phones as the name suggests are easy to carry, to
use
 and easy to maintain. With
advancement
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the advancement
 of
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
 and
passage
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the passage
 of time,
their
in or at that place
there
 is
evolution
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an evolution
 in the history of mobile phones from wired to wireless and
then
 touchable panels which actually carry more information than Apollo-I- mission to
moon
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the moon
. Talking about the economic point of view, they
makes
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make
 the business
more easier
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easier
. In severe conditions, like in
coronavirus lockdown period many
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the coronavirus lockdown period, many
the coronavirus lockdown period many
 government meetings have been taking into action through video calls on mobile phones for talking about strategies and implementation of rules that could cover the threat of
coronavirus
. Even
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 are able to study online because of mobile phones.
In addition
 to these all viewpoints, there are certain facts which had to be considered like they often attract
humans
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human
human's
humans'
 attention which lead to many of its
sideeffects
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side effects
.
For example
, excess
use
 of mobile phone can result to
weakning
becoming weaker
weakening
 of eyesight.
Although
, many researchers have proven that excessive
use
 of mobile phones can
disturd
make false by mutilation or addition; as of a message or story
distort
disturb
 a person's mindset which lead to anxiety and
unconsiousness
a state lacking normal awareness of the self or environment
unconsciousness
. The harmful radiations emitted by phones can disturb human nerve impulses which could be a result of many dangerous diseases. Not so, even for
childrens which
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children, which
children which
 tends towards gaming, watching
movies etc
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movies, etc
 on mobile phones rather than searching for their
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
standing
 material could cause a great threat to them.
Nevertheless
, everything has its own shortcomings and benefits, which could be balanced by its proper
use
 that in turn help us to
outshining
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outshine
 its
invention
.
Hence
, we can say, that mobile phones are indispensable
invention
 to human kind.

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