Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Ms. Barrett, I am Lukas Tomiska and I am writing

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letter to ask you if you are still looking for someone to help you with your work. I am very interested in

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position and I

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have extensive experience with

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particular job. As you stated in your advertisement, I could help you with the renovation of your bathroom and kitchen. I am offering

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help because I have the skills for

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type of work.

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, I do not only work for a local client, but I have 10 years of experience

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Australia, mainly from Sydney. Since I speak fluent English, we will not have a problem with the language barrier.

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, I think I am the right person for you and for your renovation. I would be available for you throughout August, as I still do not have a job.

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, I will not be in the Czech Republic for the whole of July, just because I will be on vacation with my family, but I will be back the

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weekend of July I look forward to hearing from you Best regards Lukáš

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coherence and cohesion

Try to include a more explicit introduction and conclusion to clearly frame your letter and summarize your points.

task achievement

Be cautious with the phrasing. Instead of 'I could help you with the renovation of your bathroom and kitchen,' specify your interest in helping with household tasks as stated in the prompt to better align your response.

suitable writing tone

Your letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is very suitable for the task.

complete response

You provided appropriate details about your availability, which reflects well on your task response.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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