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Many people think having enough money brings happiness but others think too much money can bring problems. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #money #happiness
In
this
 modern world where we live, achieving everything is increasingly more uncomplicated
then
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than
 most people believe that happiness always can be bought,
otherwise
 there are some individuals who do not agree with
this
 idea and see the elation in special moments,
such
 as family gatherings or even being
next
 to who is really important. But who is right? One bliss are valuer than another? In
this
 essay, I will present my point of view about these questions. I do not believe that exist the suitable contentment or a more valuable one than another. I do consider that happiness “is in the eye of the beholder”,
that is
 each one knows about what makes them happy,
therefore
 seeing pleasure in anything that money can buy should not be judged as a shallow feeling.
Otherwise
, as far as I am concerned, everything must be equitable and mainly who thinks that any kind of well-being can discover only on money should reassess some their concepts and realizes whether they are spending a few times with someone who makes the difference in their days because life changes and goes by fast,
thus
 suddenly that person cannot be there anymore.
This
 situation may generate regrets, and, in my opinion, there is nothing more unhappy than living with that sense. In conclusion, as I have discussed above, the both sides of elation have their importance and neither of those should be belittled,
nonetheless I
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nonetheless, I
 would suggest contemplating more in “being” than “owning” to whom prioritizes wealth as an essential bliss source and enjoying their leisure with loving relatives and friends, as well as doing something that can make you cheerful.
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