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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #animals #zoos
Nowadays, most of the zoos keep in zoos. We can see some uncommon animals in only zoos. I agree with
this
 opinion. I believe that animals should not be kept in zoos.
First
 of all, animals should be kept in places that people can easily communicate with animals. It probably contributes to gaining an amount of knowledge. People are not allowed to communicate with them in zoos. People can understand the features or something like that details of a
nimals
Suggestion
the animals
only after they communicate with them. Briefly, making more opportunities are beneficial to us. The other reason is that animals should be able to kept by people who want to have regardless of what kinds they are. Under the current circumstances, it is difficult for us to have some uncommon animals in the house. People usually can have only dogs, cats or birds. Having p
ets whatever
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pets, whatever
they want it makes their lives better. In conclusion, I suppose that animals should be not only in zoos but
also
 in other places. It must contribute to more familiar with animals.
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