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“Your first impressions when you meet someone are always right” Do you agree with this statement?

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 impressions are part of our daily life. Every day, when we meet
someone
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 new, we immediately form an impression of them based on their appearance and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. Yet, should we really trust our sense? As I see it,
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 impressions are often untrue and misleading.
To begin
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 with,
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 impressions only allow us to catch a glimpse of the person’s character.
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, we cannot know
someone
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 just by looking at them for a few seconds.
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, somebody who is an introvert and shy, at
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first
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 glance could come across as unfriendly and mean, when in reality, once you get to know them, they could be immensely kind and caring.
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,
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 impressions are not accurate as they might not reflect how the individual truly is. In fact, people tend to act slightly different when
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 coming in contact with
someone
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 they don’t know.
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, in my personal experience I found that people are prone to be more friendly and down-to-earth when making the acquaintance of somebody new. It is often argued that a good
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 impression is the basis of a relationship. For
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 reason, it is crucial to
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 the way people act when getting to know them, in order to understand how they really are. All in all,
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 impressions can sometimes reveal an individual’s personality, I believe that it is not wise to quickly judge
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 just by their appearance or
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
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