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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication, but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of using e-mail outweigh the advantages?

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It is certainly true that the use of
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 has greatly changed the way we communicate with each other at work as well as socially.
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, it is my belief that not all the effects of
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 innovation have been positive,
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 there are certainly some advantages. There are several drawbacks of using
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. A common criticism of
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 in the workplace is that it causes extra work and stress.
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 is because employees receive more messages than they can answer every day and since
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 writers expect a quick response,
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 increases pressure on employees. Other negative aspects are that
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 for both social and professional users include the way it encourages people to spend even longer at their computers and
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 the danger of incoming messages allowing viruses into your computer system. In spite of these negative effects,
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,
e-mail
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 has brought important benefits as well. One obvious advantage of using
e-mail
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 is that it is a fast and easy way to communicate with family, friends and work colleagues wherever they are in the world. Another positive effect is that it not only allows people to stay in touch with each other, but it
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 allows them to send all kinds of information (
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 as pictures, photos, diagrams, texts, etc. Very quickly, cheaply.
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 is a huge advance on earlier communication systems, and the low cost of
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 means it is very widely used. To sum up, while there are some obvious drawbacks to using
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,
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 fast and ever-friendly technology has greatly improved our ability to communicate both professionally and socially. It seems to me that
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 has brought us more benefits than
disadvantages
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disadvantage
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