Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * describe where you lived when you were a student at the university * recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation * warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation
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Dear Ankita,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and I am really happy because you are going to England for the highest study as you know your university is the same as where I studied.
The University of Winchester is really good for students because accommodation is available in it but I want to aware you that you have to book a room in advance. If you book late then
it will be impossible since it happened to me. After that, I lived in an apartment that was just a minute's walk distance from the university. This
was very suitable and comfortable for students, also
it is cheap as compared to other areas. Besides
that, you can reverse your flat online, by just opening a Hilton hotel website. It is too easy to book it.
Moreover
, I want to say one thing before reversing the flat please check the furniture because sometimes they give old rooms to students to gain profit. I know you are a very intelligent girl and you will handle everything wisely but if you need anything then
please don't hesitate and ask me. I hope you will be successful in your life and get a high score.
Yours
love,
Harjeet.Correct your spelling
Your
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Task Achievement
Ensure clarity and avoid confusion in your descriptions, especially when recommending specific ways to find accommodation. Clarifying the process and ensuring the information is accurate, such as referring to the correct websites or services, can greatly enhance your advice's usefulness.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, try to link ideas more seamlessly between paragraphs. Using transitional phrases can make your letter flow more naturally, guiding the reader through your advice, recommendations, and warnings without abrupt shifts.
Task Achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, effectively conveying your care and concern for your friend, which is suitable for the context of giving advice to a friend.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter is well-structured, with each paragraph dedicated to a different aspect of the accommodation advice, which aids in the letter's overall clarity and engagement.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,