Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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There are few people who believe that
art
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is an important
study
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for kids at school, but others believe that it is not worth the while and it is of no use. In
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, education is very important in our life. Educational institute provides various courses
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as math, science, social
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, English and many more, but there are few institutes which provide
art
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. I believe it is not waste of time, but
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it is very essential. It has both pros and cons. Craft is like a mirror which help students to express their feelings.
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, if a child wants to say something, but he is not good with words, but good at
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there profession speaks for them. The bottom line is
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subject is not waste of moment table and it gives the value in kids learning. It
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provide with peace of mind and it give comfort when you needed.
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, who believe it is not worth learning, they think that there are more important accountable
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as physics and science, in which, if student's spend more hour,
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they can achieve great success and do many good things for the society to live.
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, kids like the dependent on which they spend more time, but there is a chance that they might not like it in future. I strongly agree that,
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then
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art
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are very important in life, but we shouldn't neglect the value which provides to students with craft
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study
workplace for the teaching or practice of an art
studio
. To summarize, as there is saying "Education is the key to success", it is students choice what they like to research because I believe they should select the subject in what they are more interested in, but as for the craft subject it should be taught in school as it give students to see world with big pitcher and open their mind and allow them to see
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out of boundaries with their thoughts. It
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also provide
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knowledge and to express their feeling to the world as we got many great painters who are very popular for their
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art work
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artwork
and how they express what they are thinking and what knowledge they want to give to the world.
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