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Some people think that planning for the future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some hold that thinking about the
future
 is not appropriate and focusing on the present would be more essential.
However
, I completely disagree with the notion and opine that the more focus on the
next
life
 would be vital. In
this
 essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss why
this
 is and give some my examples to support my view.
First
 of all,
future
Suggestion
the future
 is our
next
life
, or
in other words
, it
is
Suggestion
will be
 our tomorrow. If people do not plan anything beforehand, they may come across unexpected situations in the
future
. In order to prevent these, one always should think about upcoming happenings.
In addition
 to
this
, planning for the
future
 is equal to being organized. With
this
 said, people who do not plan anything for the
future
 tend to be spontaneous and they
can not
can not
cannot
 predict the things they might face.
This
 might lead them to difficult situations which they would not want. Another
plausable
apparently reasonable and valid, and truthful
plausible
 reason for my view is that thinking only about current
life
 might bring about people become addicted to current
life
.
In other words
, if they plan only for the present, they
can not
can not
cannot
 clearly see the
future
, which probably lead them to be disorganized.
For instance
, we have seen some kind of people who only care about their present rather than their
future
.
Although
this
 might seem to be
initially
 appealing, they got caught in obstacle situations.
Therefore
, in my opinion, caring about the
future
life
 would be more preferable. In conclusion,
although
 some people argue that thinking
for
Suggestion
about
 the
future
 is squandering time,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly believe that
this
 is not the right option.
Instead
, thinking for our
next
life
 rather than today would be more appropriate.
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