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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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At the present time there is a big
amount
 of
litter
 produced by people in our daily
life
, which is increasing rapidly in rate day to day. It happens without doubts and the government had better to reduce the growing
amount
 of
garbage
, which can really make a serious impact on our environment causing a lot of global problems.
Firstly
, our
life
 is getting more and more convenient with creating some kind of factories, it helps us to make some kind of product, which is essential in our daily
life
.
However
, while making a product, factories
also
 produce a noticeable
amount
 of trash.
As a result
, it causes pollution of the environment.
For instance
, the factories produce mobile phone which is becoming as a part of our
life
. When they are creating some essential spare part for telephone, they make a big
amount
 of
garbage
 as well.
Secondly
, we buy some bottles of water, plastic bag, some kind of snacks or chips, and after using these things we usually throw away empty bottles, plastic bags, packages of food and it causes a serious problem
such
 as pollution of the surroundings. So, the government should take measures in order to decrease the rate of pollution of the environment.
For instance
, it is a good idea to punish people for throwing
litter
 away. It will considerably make an impact on rising
amount
 of
garbage
. Or better than that, provide each specific site with a
garbage
 machine and trash bin,
then
 these machines will collect all
litter
 from bins what makes it easier to get rid of a rubbish. Afterwards, all
this
 stuff will be delivered to the factories which recycles junk and turn it into a useful
production
Suggestion
product
.
As a result
, by doing
this
 we can decrease the
litter
 which is producing intensively. In conclusion, I would say that the most effective way to decrease the
amount
 of trash is to punish people for dropping
garbage
 and
also
 provide each specific site with the machine which collects
litter
 and deliver it to factories, and in the end turn it to some useful thing or product.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • non-biodegradable
  • waste management
  • recycling initiatives
  • consumerism
  • disposable products
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • biodegradable materials
  • circular economy
  • carbon footprint
  • landfill overflow
  • reduce, reuse, recycle
  • waste reduction strategies
  • environmental legislation
  • green technologies
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