Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views

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In the recent time period, the

publishment

of news becomes controversial issue.

Few

Suggestion

Fewer

masses hold that the press should highlight the private lifestyle of the

masses but

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masses, but

others are opposite to

this

view. I firmly stand by the latter viewpoint. In my piece of writing, I shall discuss both aspects with my agreement.

First

and foremost, a sole motive of the newspaper is to aware the masses about

located at or attached to

each and every

aspects

Suggestion

aspect

of the

life

. So, the publisher has right to discuss the personal

life

of the people to erase the number of the crimes in the society.

For example

, if the news channels spread the personal issues about any mental and physical

tourcher

the deliberate, systematic, or wanton infliction of physical or mental suffering by one or more persons in an attempt to force another person to yield information or to make a confession or for any other reason

torture

then

the government comes across various crimes and implement the laws to decline the criminal works.

Secondly

, by showing the

hardwork

Suggestion

hard work

experiences of the mankind the youth gets inspiration.

However

, everybody has the right to

enjoys

Suggestion

enjoy

the private

life

and with the interference of news editors in confidential matters

automaticaly lose

Suggestion

automatically loses

automatically lose

the interest of the masses. To illustrate

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the media highlight every news spoil the privacy of the human beings. More importantly

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some matters need secret attention, but if these come to the media hands, and perhaps, it has adverse effects on

humans

Suggestion

human

human's

life

. I think the press should not show personal things to the human beings. I agree that the media should not disclose the private living way of the human beings among the whole world.

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Topic Vocabulary:

freedom of press
public accountability
public interest
sensationalism
psychological stress
privacy invasion
ethical journalism
legal regulations
social repercussions
intrusive details
commercial gain
self-regulation
media ethics
gossip
transparency

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Fully explain your ideas

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Nowadays, some international companies become more and more powerful. Some people think it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the past, teachers were the main source of information, but today students have a wide source of information, so teachers are no longer important in the modern education. Do you agree or disagree?