Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views

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In the recent time period, the

publishment

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of news becomes controversial issue.

Few

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Fewer

masses hold that the press should highlight the private lifestyle of the

masses but

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masses, but

others are opposite to

this

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view. I firmly stand by the latter viewpoint. In my piece of writing, I shall discuss both aspects with my agreement.

First

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and foremost, a sole motive of the newspaper is to aware the masses about

located at or attached to

each and every

aspects

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aspect

of the

life

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. So, the publisher has right to discuss the personal

life

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of the people to erase the number of the crimes in the society.

For example

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, if the news channels spread the personal issues about any mental and physical

tourcher

the deliberate, systematic, or wanton infliction of physical or mental suffering by one or more persons in an attempt to force another person to yield information or to make a confession or for any other reason

torture

then

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the government comes across various crimes and implement the laws to decline the criminal works.

Secondly

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, by showing the

hardwork

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hard work

experiences of the mankind the youth gets inspiration.

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, everybody has the right to

enjoys

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enjoy

the private

life

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and with the interference of news editors in confidential matters

automaticaly lose

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automatically loses

automatically lose

the interest of the masses. To illustrate

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the media highlight every news spoil the privacy of the human beings. More importantly

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some matters need secret attention, but if these come to the media hands, and perhaps, it has adverse effects on

humans

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human

human's

life

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. I think the press should not show personal things to the human beings. I agree that the media should not disclose the private living way of the human beings among the whole world.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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240 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

freedom of press
public accountability
public interest
sensationalism
psychological stress
privacy invasion
ethical journalism
legal regulations
social repercussions
intrusive details
commercial gain
self-regulation
media ethics
gossip
transparency

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Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career seversl times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punsihment should be given?