Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views

In the recent time period, the
publishment
of news becomes controversial issue.
Few
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Fewer
masses hold that the press should highlight the private lifestyle of the
masses but
Accept comma addition
masses, but
others are opposite to
this
view. I firmly stand by the latter viewpoint. In my piece of writing, I shall discuss both aspects with my agreement.
First
and foremost, a sole motive of the newspaper is to aware the masses about
an
located at or attached to
on
each and every
aspects
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aspect
of the
life
. So, the publisher has right to discuss the personal
life
of the people to erase the number of the crimes in the society.
For example
, if the news channels spread the personal issues about any mental and physical
tourcher
the deliberate, systematic, or wanton infliction of physical or mental suffering by one or more persons in an attempt to force another person to yield information or to make a confession or for any other reason
torture
,
then
the government comes across various crimes and implement the laws to decline the criminal works.
Secondly
, by showing the
hardwork
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hard work
experiences of the mankind the youth gets inspiration.
However
, everybody has the right to
enjoys
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enjoy
the private
life
and with the interference of news editors in confidential matters
automaticaly lose
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automatically loses
automatically lose
the interest of the masses. To illustrate
,
Accept space
,
the media highlight every news spoil the privacy of the human beings. More importantly
,
Accept space
,
some matters need secret attention, but if these come to the media hands, and perhaps, it has adverse effects on
humans
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human
human's
life
. I think the press should not show personal things to the human beings. I agree that the media should not disclose the private living way of the human beings among the whole world.
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