Some people believe that men and women are equal but some not. They think that women should do only that task which is suitable to her they are both not equal. What is your opinion? Give your personal experience with examples.

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Gender either male or
female both
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female, both
equally contribute in the
economy
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economic
economical
development of
country
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the country
a country
countries
. Individually same capability in men and women
,
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,
no matter what kind of work they have to do. Now in today's world in every
field women's
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field, women's
Perform better
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
Men's. From my point of view we have to give equal opportunity and respect to every
women
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woman
.
However
the views differ
form
a giver or sender
from
person
to
person
.
First
and the foremost, from traditional time people disrespect
womens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
and not give regard to her. Most of the time
spend
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is spent
by women in
kitchen
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the kitchen
doing day to day household work and the earning hand is only one
that is
men
excavation in the earth from which ores and minerals are extracted
mine
. Our society
never allow
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never allows
has never allowed
women to do
job
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the job
a job
jobs
.
For instance
My sister is one the topper in Hotel management. She studied a lot to achieve
first
rank and got a job in
five star hotel
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a five star hotel
. But after marriage, her in laws pressurised to leave the job due to their traditions.
Secondaly
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Secondly
, In various
communities people
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communities, people
also
respect women, where they give honour and worship like a goddess. In many
countries even
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countries, even
women achieve better ranks
then
men and show their capabilities and talent like Sunita William as an astronaut, Mother Teresa as
social worker
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a social worker
and
many
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much
more.
For instance
, My wife struggle to achieve
thier
of them or themselves
their
goal of joining foreign services. She studied a lot form
thier
of them or themselves
their
childhood and
thier
of them or themselves
their
parents support a lot.
Finally she
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Finally, she
join
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joins
in
American Embassy
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the American Embassy
. Taking
all the
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all, the
point into consideration, I believe women's and men's efforts equally important in
build
Suggestion
building
up the nation strong.
However
, to some extent may be vary
person
to
person
.

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