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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

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Nowadays, supermarkets play a vital role in providing the international food or stocking up from all around the world. As in my opinion, I disagree with the statement that only local produce should be available rather than the imported stuff as both plays an essential. There are several reasons for it.
Firstly
, it helps with economic development of the country.
Moreover
, there are few countries where most of the population are immigrants.
For instance
, Canada is one among them, where almost more than fifty percent of residents are foreign nationals. It is essential to have their home country food in Canadian stores, so that their taste should not be compromised.
Secondly
, it somehow
also
 boosts the income of the shopkeepers
also
 by providing readily available exported meals by earning more profits,
thus
 equalising demand and supply.
On the contrary
, regional farmers are
also
 getting affected as least individuals will be attracted towards community eatables except those who are non-immigrants.
Furthermore
, talking in terms of finances, it
also
 impacts the currency value of the importing countries due to outflow of their money. As it depreciates the value of it.
For example
, if the Canadian government will bring more into their market as a revert back, they
also
 have to pay
thus
 more releasing of amount influencing the country. In the nutshell, there should be an appropriate percentage of goods to be available so that it either does not or very less influence the domestic merchandise or maintain the adequate import and export so that it does not affect the economy.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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