The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The given bar chart reveals information about the

quantity

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number

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of cell

phones

as well as

landlines

per 100 individuals in seven

countries’

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countries

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names: Canada,

US

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the US

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,

Germany

,

Denmark

,

UK

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the UK

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,

Sweden

and Italy. It can be clearly seen that

,

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mobile

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for mobile

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phones

, Italy has the highest proportion of 90%,

whereas

Sweden

, London and

Denmark

have more than 80% mobile

phones

per 100 people.

Germany

has 70%

cell

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of cell

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phones

.

However

, US and Canada have the lowest percentage of mobile

phones

of

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apply

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47 and 37

with

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apply

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respectively. It is observed that

,

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Denmark

has

top

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the top

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of the list for

landlines

at 88%.

While

,

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the

second

place countries in the chart USA and

Sweden

have around 68

landlines

per 100.

Germany

and UK have nearly 60

landlines

per 100 individuals. There are 63

landlines

per 100 people in Canada,

Italy

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and Italy

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,

which

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apply

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has the lowest number of

landlines

at 42 per 100 people. All in all,

Denmark

has the highest proportion of both cell

phones

and

landlines

. Mobile

phones

are preferred by UK,

Sweden

,

Germany

and Italy.