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The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The given bar chart reveals information about the
quantity
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number
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 of cell
phones
as well as
landlines
 per 100 individuals in seven
countries’
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countries
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 names: Canada,
US
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the US
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,
Germany
,
Denmark
,
UK
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the UK
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,
Sweden
 and Italy. It can be clearly seen that
,
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mobile
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for mobile
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phones
, Italy has the highest proportion of 90%,
whereas
Sweden
, London and
Denmark
 have more than 80% mobile
phones
 per 100 people.
Germany
 has 70%
cell
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of cell
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phones
.
However
, US and Canada have the lowest percentage of mobile
phones
of
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47 and 37
with
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respectively. It is observed that
,
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Denmark
 has
top
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the top
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 of the list for
landlines
 at 88%.
While
,
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 the
second
 place countries in the chart USA and
Sweden
 have around 68
landlines
 per 100.
Germany
 and UK have nearly 60
landlines
 per 100 individuals. There are 63
landlines
 per 100 people in Canada,
Italy
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and Italy
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,
which
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apply
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has the lowest number of
landlines
 at 42 per 100 people. All in all,
Denmark
 has the highest proportion of both cell
phones
 and
landlines
. Mobile
phones
 are preferred by UK,
Sweden
,
Germany
 and Italy.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phones, landlines, germany, denmark, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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