Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others that think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

Advancing
economy
is one of indications
that is
to describe a
country
's
success
.
However
, I think how live the citizens in the
country
is as important as
economy
, because some of countries have been growing
economy
, meanwhile they have a big gap between rich and poor people. I describe two factors about a
country
's
success
instead
of the growing
economy
.
Fi
rst component i
Suggestion
The first component
A first component
s an average length of life.
That is
expressed, how a superior medical treatment and how is well-being people are in that
country
.
For example
, in one of the states in U.S., they have to pay a tax for an obesity. They promote how a
first
food and oily cuisines af
fect t
produce
effect
o the body. It would know how the politics care about their health. Being a health is one of the important factors for progressing a
country
.
Se
cond component i
Suggestion
The second component
A second component
s a level of happiness of citizens. It is assessed about whether the place is safe, a livable
country
and supply a good education for children. I believe that if the people would like to live there, that
country
supposed to be
su
ccess b
Suggestion
successful
ecause the people sustain a
country
.
For example
, Finland is known as a very high level of contentment. They could demand a good social security and a good quality education. Supplying a good social security means to be made into an institution of medical treatments. In conclusion, I think that a level of happiness of citizens is the most important factor for meeting with
success
. A
country
is created by the citizens and
therefore
their satisfaction is a necessary factor.
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