Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. TO what extended do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that the kids able to learn efficiently from
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TV set
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the TV set
For that they thing the children should watch
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TV
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the TV
set daily at home and school. I completely disagree that
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is not in the best
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to teach children and the
TV
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set has an influences on children by negative
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.
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the children when sit front of the television have some fun and are not felt boring,
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set has a negative side of children when spent more time.
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, the
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set has rays effective on children's eyes and led up to some disease
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as obesity. For
instance every
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year the kids wear eyeglasses in age early
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spent more time on
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the TV set
a TV set
and has overweight problem.
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, the
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set is not the best
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learn kids because
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impacts on children's health. Another point to consider is the television has advertised only brands and tries to influence kids to buy many goods. Sometimes companies influence children to buy things that are not good
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a cooperative unit (especially in sports)
team
or expensive and some advertisements it is not suitable for children.
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, television advertisements show ads on fashion items or expensive electronics items. In conclusion, the
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set Is not a good
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to learn children because the
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set impact
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set to impact
negatively on children's health, and the
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set has a lot of advertisement which impact on children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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