Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire you about the complete

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information regarding

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vocational session, which going to be held in March 2020. I have read the advertisement in the newspaper but did not find the fee structure and the basic requirements for getting admission. From

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childhood, I really want to learn

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about computer

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computer

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computers

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due to not found a professional teacher anywhere I never learnt it.

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I am pursuing an elementary program and hardly one month pending

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completion. As per Newspaper

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college need the students who have already done

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course. So, I would like to request you to please do me a favour to enrol in

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course as it really helps to boost up my skills and knowledge in higher studies. I hope the university understands my problem and getting me to sign-up for the course. Waiting for

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positive response from your side. Yours sincerely Rahul Saini

Submitted by rs01saini on Wed May 13 2020

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