Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
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modern era, nowadays it has become highly common that people get all the news by
internet
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rather than traditional methods
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as reading
newspaper
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which was probably the main way for people getting updates in the past. In my view, it is extremely likely that latest ways of getting updates will conquer the old methods
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as newspapers.
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of all, without a doubt newspapers has been very practical and useful especially in the olden days.
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, some people are of the opinion, despite significant development in technological scopes, they think
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newspapers
the newspaper
will remain as the main source of news because some people still like to flip newspapers pages.
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, they are fans of having the news in their hands and it happens to be more pleasurable for them rather than scrolling a page with a touch screen.
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, the other positive aspect of getting updates by
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is that most of the time a
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comes with other supplements like crosswords and magazines.
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, it has been said, some of people are not in touch with the latest technology
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as
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internet
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the internet
.
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, take elderly people as an example, most of them are not familiar with the usage of
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the internet
and all the technologies which are highly dealing with
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the internet
.
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, they may prefer getting the latest new by newspapers.
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, these days, the majority of people, especially youngsters, are the fan of getting news online since it is greatly accessible and most importantly reading news online is cost free for them. More than that, reading news online has other privileges
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as you are free to choose your favourite topics and whenever they get updated you can set your notification alarm on, so you won't miss the latest news. And
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that, environmentalists are the biggest supporters of e-papers because it leads to fewer trees to be cut.
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, with regard to those facts, when media companies' administrators start to see a notable drop income, they will become aware of the fact publishing newspapers will have no profit for them and it is going to be
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a waste for their companies,
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they will be forced to come up with novel solutions and make money from news online. To sum up,
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newspapers are still existed, though; they will gradually be replaced by modern ways of getting updates.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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