Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

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It is argued monuments and museums are mostly tourism

attractions places

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they are predominantly visited by tourists rather than local people. In

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essay I will investigate the reason behind

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issue and suggest some solutions of attracting local residents.

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, there is an obvious difference between a local resident and a tourist motivation.

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, a tourist will accept the costs of a trip because his or her

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ambition

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is to visit and learn about that new

place

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and become familiar about that

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culture and history.

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, the same thing does not go to a local resident. For residents seeing constantly a great and popular historical

place

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may not be something spectacular, mostly because that person has become used to that

place

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and probably already know much great deal about that historical

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, does not inspire him or her. Meanwhile, a tourist on holiday has set aside time for visiting a historical

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. Despite

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, attendance of local people to monuments can be encouraged by various ways.

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and foremost, the assessment of historical sites and museums could undergo many changes

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as amusing festivals and galas. Or

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museums and historical places sometimes can announce tickets half of the price for especial events or even can offer free tickets.

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, they can even open restaurants near the museums so when people get there to grab a bite, they might be cheered to take a tour of the museum. To sum up, tourists have way different motivating reasons compared to local people in visiting historical sites and museums.

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, city hall can come with new and absorbing alternatives for courage the local people attending historical places and museums in their cities or towns.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

Your opinion

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively.

Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?