Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen & sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In today’s world, sports personalities are becoming popular with their performance and impressing more people all around the places.

However

, they do unwanted actions on or off stage which is necessary. Whereas, a few think

that is

all right if they are good all their game. Well,

refers to the speaker or writer

think, it is unacceptable due to some reasons. Apparently, some humans support famous sportsmen behaviour if they won a prize or played outstandingly in a match. By knowingly or unknowingly, that encourages these mega stars to continue

such

actions. They are looking it in a game point of view and do not aware of the problems. On the other side, it is totally unfair because these superstars are a role model for current and

generations. If they misbehave, that could mislead the adolescents who watches their match or shows.

For example

, if an Olympic gold medallist tennis layer exposes his angry face or rude actions once he / she scored more than the opposite player or won the match. Teenagers who all are seeing it could start to follow it on their own life once they achieved something. Ridiculously, in the long run, they mentally get disturbed and that will suffer their personal life. Usually, not everyone takes sports as a hobby. Some of us very serious about it and

also they consider

Suggestion

they also consider

their favourite one as a hero. So, it is vital that game professionals keep that on their mind and act

accordingly

. To conclude, I totally disagree with

this

statement. It is better for them and the country, if they stop doing it. Else, it is undeniable to punish them.

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