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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #education #income
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Over recent decades, by increasing in the number of universities, nowadays more and more students are keen on attending
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, still arguments on free
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 for
everyone
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 are persevered. There are some acceptable arguments on both sides.
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, I strictly believe
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 should be free for
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 around the world. One argument put forward in favour of charging students for studying is that because the number of universities is growing,
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 funding and allocating various scholarships are becoming problematic.
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, it is stated that paying tuition and fees have made students studying and working harder in order to pass the exams with flying colours.
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 but not least, in some countries, statistics indicate that the number of volunteers for manual occupations
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 as carpentry and hairdressing are decreasing. And because in all societies manual careers are relatively highly needed, so making
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 costlier may cause people to take these jobs.
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, there are various arguments in favour of making
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 free for
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. Some people believe that having well-educated work force is considered to be a privilege for a country's economy, so free
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 can result in a more productive society because in
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 way, almost every talented and brilliant student can attend
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, some people argued if all students are required to pay, those students with low income would be deprived of having educational degree and
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 is totally inequitable. And based on
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, some people think paying for
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 at least should not be mandatory for students with poor financial status.
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 brief, I think if
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 degree is beneficial to almost
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,
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 it should be endured equally accessible and available for
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. Because all people from all different nations are deserved to have
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 privilege.
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