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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What make successful person?

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Richest are considered by many people more successful than the normal ones because they have a lot of material stuff. In my opinion,
success
Suggestion
the success
 of the people can be measured in many ways and I
also
 believe that every type of experience in our
life
 can make a person successful. People struggle in their
life
 to accumulate wealth in abundance, as many believe that wealth is
ultimate goal
Suggestion
the ultimate goal
 of
life
, but it does not follow that all wealthy people are successful.
Although
, modern society believes that money and fancy house are the best way to classify
success
, despite that there are different methods to measure it. In fact, one of them it can be getting the job that you have always dreamed of since you were a kid,
this
 means being repaid by the efforts made during your
life
 path.
Secondly
, another method for evaluating
success
 could be having strong moral values to follow in any situation, it is
also
 confirmed by some sociologists that each person has
proper conception
Suggestion
a proper conception
 of
success
.
On the other hand
, is not
crucial what
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crucial, what
 things people do in order to become
successful but
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successful, but
 how they tackle problems and which methods they decide to adopt to solve them. People that are called
successful
Suggestion
successfully
 found every time the strength to resolve the unexpected that encounter in their
life
, according to many researchers it is precisely bad situations where people show their survival skills. In conclusion, wealth is not essential to achieve
success
, which can be found through other ways. If more people strived to understand what kind of efforts are needed to achieve
success
 rather than material goods,
population
Suggestion
the population
 would be more successful.
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