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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with statement?

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching TV set.
However
, television can not replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less good-educated today. I think
this
 acute issue should be tackled by the government or by the parents. "Nowadays children are the future of society"- so said the
first
 president of the Republic of Uzbekistan A. Karimov. So why are children spending a lot of time for watching tv set these days. Some people prefer for education to watching video, those who disagree point out that a reading books are a good
way
 of educating. Many children prefer to watch audio. Because, learning on the station is more interesting than reading a book. Turning round the corner,
this
way
 not very good. When we study on station, our eyes suffer more than when we learn by reading a book.
Also
, in many families do not have boxes and their children can not learn on TV.
Furthermore
, not all children use television in the right
way
, like the Internet. They should always be under parental control. Not all parents a lot of time to control their children. In conclusion, I should write about a carnivorous.
This
 is a global issue too. In quarantine all people must study on video. Including me too. When I studied on
TV
Suggestion
a TV
the TV
 set, I did not understand what I do. In short, I did not study on audio. I realized, that box could not replace books.
Book
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The book
 is
very good
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a very good way
way
for
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of
education
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educating
.
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