You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter: say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Mean,
Hope you are doing great.
First
of all, let me thank you for your help in finding an
accommodation and other facilities. Sincerely, you have done a great job in finding a home to stay as a paying guest, as per my budget. But, I’m sorry to say that, I do not think I can continue here, in Correct article usage
apply
this
stay-home. The owner and the family are so caring and they are good in
giving privacy. That part is okay. But, they have a small kid of 1.5 years old. He is so cute, perhaps being of Change preposition
at
this
age, he cries continuously at night time. As,
I have only Remove the comma
apply
night
to study, I find it’s difficult to continue here.
I’m okay with the budget as well as the food they provide. But, I need a more convenient place, quiet enough for my studies. In fact, I wanted to stay as a paying guest despite Correct pronoun usage
one night
of
staying in a hostel, because Remove the preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
for
this
reason. I am always concerned about my privacy and determined in studies
.
Please arrange another place within Correct pronoun usage
my studies
this
budget. It is okay,
if I have to add a few more to the current amount. Please find a place as soon as possible, before my exam dates are announced.
Looking forward to Remove the comma
apply
hear
from you
Your’s faithfully
JahangirChange the verb form
hearing
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