What are the advantage and disadvantage of leaving your country to live or study abroad

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It is a debatable that, a group of
individuals consider
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individuals, considers
individuals considers
that
leaving
the experience of being alive; the course of human events and activities
living
in your country and
also
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study abroad is
approving
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approved
. It has been a gradually increasing trend, as plenty of perspective students as well as ordinary workers leave their homelands hoping to become more successful.
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However they
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However, they
usually have to separate from families and leave their places of residences. In
this
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essey
prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issue
will be discussed the advantages and disadvantages of living and studying abroad.
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with, there are some considerable pros, the youth can study in foreign universities in order to become prosperous specialists, which isn't a trivial goal to achieve in the native country.
For instance
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, some of the best Uzbekistan pupils choose to study at Oxford University because it is considered to be one of the top universities in the world in terms quality of education. And
also
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Adults migrate abroad if they want to earn more money and to have better career opportunities.
For example
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the minimum salary in Uzbekistan is around two
million while
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million, while
in America it is 700
dollor
the basic monetary unit in many countries; equal to 100 cents
dollars
.
Therefore
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, people can afford to satisfy their needs better living in
wealty
having an abundant supply of money or possessions of value
wealthy
wealth
foreign countries.
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, there some cons
to
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of
leaving the Homeland usually means
damanging
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
damaging
relationships with other people.
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Additionally when
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Additionally, when
a person owns a flat, they should
cantinue
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continue
continues
continued
to pay taxes even if they leave the place of residence and leaves abroad.
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Thus
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This
neteworthy
worthy of notice
noteworthy
is the fact that one can miss relatives and leaving home can be unpleasant sometimes. To sum up, it can be seen that something should be sacrificed due to the seeking of a better life.
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However it
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However, it
is generally advantageous to take the challenge of living in a foreign country to become a successful person. It is hoped that all countries in the future will be able to provide it is citizens equal opportunities to achieve their life goals. 310 words.
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