Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

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Over the
last
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few decades, scientists have been constantly warning us about environmental problems that our planet is encountering and
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serious consequences it will have for us. Some people believe that the major environmental problem of our time is only the loss of especial species of some plants and animals.
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, others believe there are
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much more tormenting environmental issues that we should take into consideration.
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, I strongly believe environmental issues we are facing these days are not just brief into extinction of some species.
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with, there are many notable reasons behind environmental problems we are having in these recent years. And it is an irrefutable fact that the
environment
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is exposed to many dangers. Some people are of the opinion that the only issues are threatening
environment
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is the extinction of some types of animals and plants.
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, some researchers and scientists believe that dying out of some plants and some types of animals is a huge dilemma and certainly will have detrimental effects on
ecosystem
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ecosystems
the ecosystem
an ecosystem
. It has been said, by the elimination of a type of animals, the ecosystem circle will be facing flawed.
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, the loss of particular types of animals and plants is considered to be very controversial and
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extremely problematic in the recent years.
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, while some people think there are other critical issues that have led to environmental crisis.
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, climate changing, deforestation and so on. There are certainly many reasons behind climate changing and deforestation.
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and foremost, the factories which are producing black
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are the very effective reason and
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they make no efforts to minimize the pollution.
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, greenhouse
gases
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gas
emissions like CO2 in the air mostly because of huge increases in using cars all over the world and development of industries and homes nowadays generate garbage and sewage that can pollute land and water. All in all, they are the main threats to
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environment
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the environment
which all
cause
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causes
the earth gets warmer and warmer and that will result in climate changing. Scientists believe humans are behind all of them.
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, humans are thinking of developing the cities and
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factories, so they are cutting down many trees or
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they are deforesting jungles. To sum up, without a doubt we are ruining our planet and more specifically our
environment
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. Increasing factories, emissions of greenhouse gases and deforesting woods, which are the
home animals
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home, animals
, we are turning the
earth no
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earth, no
place to live even for ourselves in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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