The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate the changes that

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taken place in a bookstore from the year 2000 onwards till to date.

Overall

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, the book sections have essentially stayed the same in number. The

fiction

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section

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has,

however

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, squeezed considerably and a new reading

corner

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has come into existence. In

year

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the year

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2000, the bookstore had an entrance towards the west with a service desk, new

books

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and a travel

corner

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in a row starting from south to north. The centre of the

store

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was again divided into non-

fiction

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, art, hobbies and cookery

section

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from south-north.

Whole

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of the northern side of the

store

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including

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the north-east

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north-east

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northeast

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corner

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contained

fiction

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books

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. At present, the area of the

store

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has almost stayed the same.

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, no change has been observed in the travel, new

books

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and help desk sections. The non-

fiction

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section

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has moved to the

north-east

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northeast

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corner

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of the

fiction

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section

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Whereas

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, a cafeteria has been added to the bookstore at the place which was previously allocated to non-

fiction

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books

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Moreover

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, the central part of the

store

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has got a new reading zone that contains three tables and chairs. The Arts, hobbies and cookery that used to exist in the centre previously, have been shifted to the

fiction

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area which is reduced to almost one-fifth of its previous space at present.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fiction, section, corner, books, store with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

218 words

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