Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn language in childhood. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is the trend that many parents encourage their kids to start learning additional foreign languages.

Therefore

, many people

argree

be in accord; be in agreement

agree

agreed

argue

that youngsters are more likely to pick up new

language

rather than adults. I

wholeheartly

without reserve; without reservation

wholeheartedly

support the view and shall but some of the explanation in the following

paragraghs

one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line

paragraphs

paragraph

At the forefront, it is undeniable that the youth are capable of making the grade in new things. Due to their developing acquisition skills led them to have good command of new

language

. One more illustration is that children are not as busy as adults, they tend to have more leisure and it helps their learning become more effective. To exemplify, researchers have found that young people possess sharp-mind and it build high critical

intellected

skills.

However

,

Accept space

,

this

is not the case for naughty and

unscupulous

without scruples or principles

unscrupulous

children. Comparison-based, adults would find it more difficult in

accquiring

the act of acquiring something

acquiring

a

language

. It is because they have more things to do and some people have to deal with financial problems as well as balance their work-life. All these predicaments fill up their gap

time

and cause

tiring

shedding tears

tearing

.

That is

why adults can not devote enough

time

for studying. Apparently, to be

expert

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an expert

in

any

quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity

some

fields, ones

need

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needs

to have

pratical

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

knowledge and be able to learn and review it continuously so that to prevent from forgetting. Yet older people are busy which it

put

Suggestion

puts

the adverse impacts on their educational journey.

By contrast

, if

elders

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the elders

have sufficient

time

, they would be better because he/she

already comprehend

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already comprehends

with the structure

and

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and, for

for example

, the

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

meaning of a word that children are not old enough to understand. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would like to reiterate that children have more benefits in

accquiring

the act of acquiring something

acquiring

new

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a new language

language

because they do not have to face with anxiety

.

Accept space

.

Unlike adults, they busy

time

eclise

their absorbing skills.