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At the present time, the population of some countries include relative large numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

#time #population #countries #numbers #adults #people #situation #experiences
Nowadays, each aspect
in
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of
 the planet is growing up rapidly and the world is tending to rejuvenate. The question is
the more young
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the younger
the youngest
 generation
,
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,
 the better it will be
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 From an intuitive vision
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,
 the youth are usually more active than older people who are often have physiological changes that affect a lot their enthusiasm. The old will have some physical and mental weaknesses. They cannot focus 100 percent on what they’re doing and convey heavy weight
smoothily
with no problems or difficulties
smoothly
.
For instance
, my
mom
 is 50 years old. She cannot
carries
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carry
 a heavy briefcase because her health is gradually going down. My father is 52
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.
 As
a
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an
 alumnus, he always completed his deadline
neatly but
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neatly, but
 now he just can do it carefully and slowly.That’s what help young people. On the other side, the old
have
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has
 massive experiences which they have collected on their way of life. They will often make more empirical and more informed decisions so they can instruct and educate their children properly. They cannot do everything
rocketly
 but
more accurately
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more accurate
 than young
alduts
a fully developed person from maturity onward
adults
 so they are more believable. As
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
 can see, why almost president and prime minister all over the world is old people? And why every
companies
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company
 have older people is the boss
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?
 They’re easier to trust because they consist of
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factors
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Factors
 than the youth. In my opinion, each age has advantages and
disadvantages so
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disadvantages, so
 each age has its own benefits.I think each country must
has
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have
 their own way to balance their population.
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