Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine and newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

We live in an age when the personal lives of celebrities including their meals, family and friends are increasingly being scrutinized by newspapers and magazines that make us always see their images in private situations. From my point of view, the intervention of media in the individual lives of people is not suitable in several cases.
First
of all, it is worth considering that magazines often feature stories about celebrities’ living which are neither informative nor useful for viewers.
Moreover
, some news which
are deliberately written
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is deliberately written
incorrectly for personal benefits put famous people in many troubles and they do not even know why. To give a clear example, in 2016, Hoai Lam was one of the hottest young singers in Vietnam and of course, his individual information is always sought-after by the press. Many of them are not only unimportant
news but
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news, but
also
make him feels uncomfortable and pressured.
As a result
, he gave up his career when he was at the peak and he had to do many unstable jobs for his family.
Consequently
, journalists should make sure that they write about the facts only, not rumours and fake news and especially personal information. Another point worth noting is that
interventing
the act of intervening (as to mediate a dispute, etc.)
intervention
intervening
too deeply in the lives of stars will cause some unnecessary misunderstandings.
For instance
,
appearance
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the appearance
appearances
on the media benefits the stars by giving free publicity to them and helping their careers,
however
, if the press features deeply about famous personalities, audiences may think that celebrities have paid for
such
news to attract more attention. These misconceptions cause great unhappiness
to
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for
the people concerned. In conclusion, magazines and newspapers should focus on the necessary news about famous people and avoid giving kind of private information too much.
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