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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. What are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What is the best way to overcome them?

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In current times, many people are learning a new
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language, all
 around the world. Some people think learning a foreign
language
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 is a daunting task. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss
difficulties
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the difficulties
 in learning a foreign
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 explain some solutions for them. It is on the one hand obvious that learning a new
language
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 has some difficulties. It could be the
first
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 problem that many students think in their mother tongues, which may not be rational because different languages have different structures. Taking Persian students who are learning English as a clear example; they think with Persian structures
to
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of
 writing an essay, at the beginning of learning, so their writings are not clear for English readers. Pronunciation can be the
second
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 problem; every
language
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 has different vowels. It is
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 learners’ mother tongues may be completely different in terms of vowels, which is considered a problem for students to pronounce a word from a new
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 correctly. It is
on the other hand
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 clear that being exposed to a foreign
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 can be a good way to learn that
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. To be familiar with the structures of languages, students need to read and listen as much as possible, in
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 case, students will gradually learn the new
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 structure, and can think in that
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. Watching English television series can as an example; boost learners’
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 skills. There is
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 software which can help students learn to pronounce words. Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English is,
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, suitable software for English learners to practice pronunciations of words. All in all, learning a foreign
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 is a challenging process. There are some problems in learning a new
language
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, but all of them can be solved
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 suitable means.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Phonetics
  • Syntax
  • Conjugation
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cognates
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Pedagogy
  • Linguistic competence
  • Mnemonics
  • Language acquisition
  • Pronunciation drills
  • Conversation partners
  • Language barrier
  • Bilingualism
  • Multilingualism
  • Accent reduction
  • Comprehension
  • Language proficiency
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