The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.

The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries Spain, Turkey, Ireland, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
The table chart depicts that information about expenditure consumers on food, clothes, and leisure in five countries, Spain,
Turkey
,
Ireland
, Sweden, and Italy in 2002.
Overall
, a glance at
this
given table reveals that
while
the
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Turkey
and
Ireland
had the largest proportion in terms of food, the people living in Italy had the largest spending percentage on clothing.
In contrast
, Spina had the lowest proportion in education.
To begin
,
Turkey
and
Ireland
spent around 30% of their total income on food,
while
other countries used less than 20% of their
money
in the same category.
However
, around 6% of the total
money
of
Turkey
and
Ireland
was gone on
the
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clothing, compared with around 10 % for
this
figure in Italy.
On the other hand
, all countries
excepting
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Spain spent more than 2% of their aggregate
money
on
the
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education, but Spain spent under 2 percentage of its total
money
.
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