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In some countries, the number of people using bikes as main transport mode is decreasing, even though it is so beneficial why is this so how can people and courage to use more bicycles.

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Globalisation has brought tremendous changes
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in
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the whole world. Gone are the days,
bicycle
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to
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among
masses
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Whereas nowadays
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, 
individual
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individuals
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 give preference to other transport modes like
car
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 and bikes  In
this
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this
 phenomenon and suggest ways to motivate
people
 to
use
 more
bicycles
. There are many reasons for not using
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the
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bicycle
 in today's world.The first and foremost reason is the car and public transport is very lucrative as compared to
bicycle
 because it saves our
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 time
while
 travelling.
Besides
this
, the current century witnessed tremendous advancements in technology.
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 the roads are full
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 heavy traffic so
bicycles
 are no saving.
Last
 but not least
people
 want to show off their status.
Due to
this
 majority of
people
 give preference to using bikes
instead
 of
bicycles
. There are many ways to motivate
people
 to
use
 the
bicycle
. One approach is
the
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  government
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to impose
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 tax on these types of vehicles like car, buses and so on so that individuals give preference to
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 which is very beneficial for health. Another approach is, the
bicycle
 is a cheap and green mode of transport. Media
such
 as TV could be used
for encouraging
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individual
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individuals
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 to
use
bicycle
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 and the administration can motivate
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 generation by organising new camps in schools and colleges and
tell
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 them
advantages
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the advantages
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 of
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.
To conclude
, the above-mentioned argument
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 a nutshell. It can be concluded everything has its own importance under the sun and
bicycle
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 is one of them. The government can implement some effective steps to promote the
use
 of
bicycles
.
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