Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin to learn a foreign language in primary school rather than secondary. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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rather than high school
, and I believe its benefit far outweigh the drawbacks because not only does it allow children to learn the new culture
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they also have better
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if learnt in the primary school
curriculum and one of them is getting easily confused. This
is because often being not mature enough, children integrate their native language
with foreign dialect. This
has resulted in, neither of which is learnt properly. For example
, a recent article by the Times of India reported that the majority of students who tried to learn foreign tongue a
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mingled languages and perplexed, which has resulted in not being able to speak their native language
too, which is considered crucial by some.
Despite this
aforementioned drawback, there are various positives of learning a new language
in primary school
. Firstly
, it assists in learning a new culture
. Being more receptive to learn new things, children often do not feel reluctant while pronouncing a new language
, which allows them to learn another tongue effortlessly. This
has resulted in them to understand the new culture
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job
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of 5 to 13, they possess a
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For example
, a recent survey conducted by Harvard University found that bilingual or multilingual has better
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a better job opportunity
job
opportunity than monolingual due to learning the foreign language
at an early age
. This
has resulted in receiving job
offers with high salaries from overseas.
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at an early ag
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