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Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more and more pupils are enrolling in an online course. The online program provides the material,
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 as digital textbook, students can access in a class through the internet connection.
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, some people believe that the advantage of studying with the professor at the university is outnumbered the online-learning. In my opinion, I completely agree with
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 statement.
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 with, as the distance-learning classes offer a lesson through the media platforms,
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 contributes to the severe consequences either a student will be disturbed by the distraction or may neglect the academic lessons.
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, study at home provides an insufficient environment unlike the educational institute, the attention of the pupils may be disturbed by the attraction.
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, a university pupil, who participated in an online course, is subject to the distraction by the online application and could abandon the current lesson. Undoubtedly, studying via a media platform leads to an increasing amount of utility and miscellaneous expenses.
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, a student has to pay an extra price for the internet connection.
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, if a student attend to the class at the colleges, it will be no charge for the WIFI connection.
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, the price of the online syllabus is considerably higher than that of the ordinary class.
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, online students have to pay more and loses a huge amount of money.
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, recently, most of the universities have adapted their classes to an online learning, the pupils have been reported that the expenditure of tuition fee and utility bill were increased overwhelmingly. To conclude, participating in a normal course brings far more benefit that those studying at home. A pupil could save a tuition cost as well as utility expenses.
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, they will not get disturbed by any disturbances.

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