The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?

The
use
of nuclear
power
has become one of the most debated topics in the
last
century. Some people are against the
use
of nuclear
power
due to
its potentially destructive effects, like 8 decades ago in Japan.
However
others, taking into consideration many benefits of nuclear
power
like its low cost, green energy and potential to
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world peace, claim that the pluses exceed the drawbacks. I strongly that there are more advantages to nuclear
power
than disadvantages.
Firstly
, nuclear
power
can be helpful for industrial purposes.
For instance
, nuclear
power
can be used to produce hydrogen through processes like high-temperature electrolysis or thermochemical water splitting which can be helpful in the fields like chemistry.
Also
, it is used in the field of medicine where using nuclear technology doctors can save multiple lives by identifying and destroying cancer cells.
Moreover
, nuclear
power
has a small carbon footprint compared to alternatives like fossil fuels. Nuclear
power
provides cheap and clean energy without emitting any harmful gases into the atmosphere.
Whereas
, burning fossil in a large scale for factories and other type of industrial purposes can lead to many types of ecological problems.
For example
,
due to
high emissions of carbon into the atmosphere from factories and automobiles, we have a problem of global warming, which is a threat to our living on
this
planet. In conclusion, I contend that the
use
of nuclear
power
gives us lots of benefits in
the
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multiple industrial fields and can be the most effective way of producing energy. So I think nations should
use
them even more.
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The essay provides a general argument supporting the use of nuclear power, but it lacks a clear structure and detailed examples. The connection between the ideas could be strengthened with better transitions and cohesive devices.
task achievement
The response to the task is relevant but underdeveloped. There needs to be a balance of idea development and an equal discussion of both the benefits and disadvantages of nuclear technology to fully address the task. Include a clearer position that covers both sides to meet the requirements of the prompt.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Deterrence
  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
  • Catastrophic accidents
  • Climate change
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