Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
In recent days
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young people migrate from one place to another place for their career growth as well as to enhance their Accept space
,
life style
.Due to the opportunities found more in cities than a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
non urban
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the non urban area
non urban areas
a non urban area
area
that made people to stay away from their home.Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss the benefits of Linking Words
this
development with supporting examples.
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Firstly
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the livelihood of the people plays a major role in an economy.Developments Accept space
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such
as universitiesLinking Words
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companies are constructed where the facilities are convenient to them.In rural areas, there will be a basic level of education could be found.Accept space
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Hence
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For pursuing higher education young people to leave their home to pursue their career in Accept space
,
a
effective and efficient way.On one handSuggestion
an
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there are Accept space
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lot
of job opportunities are exist in citiesSuggestion
lots
,
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on the other hand
, there are more training institute Linking Words
are
available to get trained for professional courses that bridges the gap between the company's expectations and student skills.
People from various states or country will come to cities for education purpose that enhance their communication skill as well as students will get new environment.
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is
Secondly
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the salary package earned by the people from a reputed company will be more comparable to the income earned in non urban Accept space
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area
.Feasibility in technology will be more in cities rather than rural areas.Use synonyms
with
the help of technologySuggestion
With
,
young people can enhance their Accept space
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skill
by doing 3D interactive sessions.
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skills
For instance
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all the research Accept space
,
center
like ISROSuggestion
centres
centre
,
Medical research Accept space
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centers
are available in rural an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
area
that might help the students in doing their internship that develop their knowledge
Use synonyms
For example
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I had a training program for ICICI Bank Accept space
,
limited
small in range or scope
Limited
.
The training program was conducted in Chennai so I moved from urban Accept space
.
area
to Use synonyms
rural
Suggestion
a rural area
rural areas
area
Use synonyms
.
I have got an opportunity to meet new peopleAccept space
.
,
new environment that Accept space
,
develop
my communication skill and confidence.
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develops
Therefore
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it is apparent that young people moving to cities Accept space
,
has
an advantages, but it Suggestion
have
doesn't means
that people living in urban areas are not developed.Some people came from urban areas had achieved a lot in their career and work.
To concludeSuggestion
doesn't mean
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Despite people thinks the development was happening in rural areasAccept space
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the advantages of the development in urban areas outweigh disadvantages.Accept space
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