Some people believe that modern innovations bring more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree?

All times, scientists and developers around the world have been discovering new technologies, vaccines and other things.
Nonetheless
, all innovations have not only a profitable
part
such
as easier work or the heal of illness, but
also
drawbacks like side effects or the bugs of software, and the majority of people think the problems outweigh benefits.
However
, I cannot agree with
such
people because with time innovations undergo modernization that improves it and diminishes weakness that means the more time people use innovations the less problem
such
things has.
Firstly
, few people can deny the fact that many innovations are an essential
part
of our life that people, even, almost cannot see problems. On the surface is computers with the internet,
for example
, because both have many problems,
although
a profitable
part
is enormous; inasmuch as, both these technologies implement everywhere, even, for new discoveries.
Likewise
, computers at the start was inconvenient and almost impractical, despite with time developers have been modernizing
such
technology to modern convenient and handy form.
Thus
, probably is unnecessarily for people judge all new discoveries on
first test
Suggestion
the first test
.
Nevertheless
, society cannot ignore the drawbacks of innovations because all of them have side effects or problems. Electro cars,
for instance
, are friendly to the environment, but have many other problems, especially with the charges.
Furthermore
, again the internet is a field for many frauds or provides other problems with privacy, and even the problems with health.
Consequently
, society cannot ignore problems with innovations and would have to report developers about it in order to prevent trouble in the future. To conclude, the world has been developing by discovery of new things, which improves our life, wherein all innovations from the start with some problems.
Therefore
, I think people would have to report about problems that leads to diminishes them and will increase a profitable
part
, which is the opposite of the topic statement.
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